Modern Art
I am here, but do you see me? I Twitter my voice, but do you know me?
I want to step from my box, my canvas, my rectangular prison.
I can see your face, but I cannot touch you.
I want to feel something. A touch maybe. A breath. Your laughter.
I imagine you. Are you wearing red today? Do you wonder about me?
Do we look at each other like pieces of art, hanging from the wall, imagining what could be, but never daring?
Tags: isolation, Museum of Modern Art, urban life








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Pretentious?
By Neil on 01.09.08 7:01 pm
I don’t find it the LEAST bit pretentious, I think it perfectly expresses the way some of us feel at times.
Lovely.
By aka_monty on 01.09.08 7:02 pm
Have you ever seen “living art” in Laguna Beach or somewhere else? That’s kind of how it is for me. Some people are so pretty to look at and to read but in the end, they take off their masks and become real.
Now *I* feel pretentious
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By Hilly on 01.09.08 7:03 pm
I don’t think it’s pretentious, either.
By Alison on 01.09.08 7:08 pm
you rule.
By sweetney on 01.09.08 7:14 pm
I think it is cool.
By Allan on 01.09.08 7:17 pm
more people should dare.
By sizzle on 01.09.08 7:24 pm
Great post, Neil. I came due to your Twitter, and glad I did
By Angella on 01.09.08 7:35 pm
I LOVED this. Very up my alley.
By 180/360 on 01.09.08 7:56 pm
Wait?! Does that make me pretentious? NO. Neither is this.
By 180/360 on 01.09.08 7:57 pm
i’m sorry, i couldn’t read a word you wrote. i was too engrossed with all the lovely art. lichtenstein, warhol….
By gorillabuns on 01.09.08 8:28 pm
Nice post. I love MOMA. But isn’t it outrageous that it’s like, $20 to get in now?
(shakes head in disbelief).
By teahouseblossom on 01.09.08 9:28 pm
Not pretentious at all. I know the feeling well.
Yikes, $20 to get into MOMA now? High, but I’d pay it, haven’t been there in years.
By Rosa on 01.09.08 10:05 pm
I like that Neil. Very dreamy.
It reminds me of my visit to the Warhol exhibition here in Amsterdam.
Isn’t it coincidental that we were looking at work by the same artist within a few weeks of each other, in two different countries on two different continents?
By Ash on 01.09.08 11:04 pm
Hilarious and delightful!
Andy would have totally dug it.
Oh, and $20, my Aunt Fanny. I go on the free day. Or, as I liked to call it, “The Day I Finally Made an Iota Back on All the Money I Made Wells Fargo” Day.
By communicatrix on 01.09.08 11:26 pm
I was there in October, stood in line for over an hour in the pouring rain to get in for free, covered every square foot of the museum for even more hours once I got in. The whole thing was exhausting, but wonderful.
By Julia on 01.10.08 12:47 am
Oooh! This was very nice, and not the least bit pretentious. It is art; the fine art of writing, Neil.
By Geeky Tai-Tai on 01.10.08 1:43 am
Pretentious? No. Refreshing? Yes.
(I love the dude trying to be Elvis.)
By Miguelina on 01.10.08 3:43 am
not pretentious, i’m not wearing red today, i’ve never understood that warhol soup thing, i have a problem with people on cell phones in an art gallery and yeah, i am wondering about you right at this very moment. happy thoughts.
By better safe than sorry on 01.10.08 6:08 am
Oooo… cool. I love this!
By Finn on 01.10.08 6:28 am
modern art……………………………………………………………….well, I suppose it’s better than a poke in the eye with a sharp stick…
By Akaky on 01.10.08 7:32 am
Do you wonder if everyone looking at the Campbell’s soup art is thinking, simultaneously, “Mmm, mmm, good”?
(I do.)
By kerrianne on 01.10.08 7:42 am
“I want to feel something. A touch maybe. A breath. Your laughter.”
*Swoon*
By Jessica on 01.10.08 7:47 am
Maybe a little highfalutin but I enjoyed it and escaped from my rectangular prison for an instant.
By psychomom on 01.10.08 7:55 am
Ah, all the works I have been studying for the past two months come flooding back. I actually still even remember the dates of many of these. Sigh.
Lovely post, Neil.
By Caitlinator on 01.10.08 8:10 am
Yes, MOMA was way too expensive, but it still was packed.
By Neil on 01.10.08 8:32 am
This is wonderful. thank u.
By melanie on 01.10.08 8:38 am
That’s the hard part about art – the looking without the touching.
By Bre on 01.10.08 8:56 am
D’oh! MoMA, not MoCA. I yam such a doof.
By communicatrix on 01.10.08 9:34 am
MOMA, MOCA, SOMA. LACMA — it all gets confusing.
By Neil on 01.10.08 9:54 am
I absolutely love this post.
By churlita on 01.10.08 11:04 am
The courage to be daring increases with age. It’s the best part of passing 40. Not just imagining what you can be, but insisting on claiming at least a part of that dream.
By V-Grrrl on 01.10.08 11:34 am
so.true.
I sometimes wonder what people smell like. Sure I can call and hear them or glance at their photos and “see” them, but to embrace and smell them.
That comfortable aroma of friendship.
By OMSH on 01.10.08 11:47 am
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By Oh My Stinkin Heck » Blog Archive » A Perfect Capture on 01.10.08 11:49 am
Not pretentious.
Lovely.
By Loralee on 01.10.08 12:16 pm
This post made me stop and think. You made me use my brain! Truly beautiful (Your post, not my brain)
By Bec on 01.10.08 2:03 pm
Thanks for reminding me that I haven’t hit SFMOMA in some time. And they have a free day once a month, as do all of the museums in SF.
By Dagny on 01.10.08 2:47 pm
Nice one, Neil.
By Atomic Bombshell on 01.10.08 4:23 pm
Pretentious? Hardly. Inspiring.
By Bemused on 01.10.08 5:02 pm
Oops… that can be taken the wrong way. I meant it as it IS inspiring
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By Bemused on 01.10.08 5:07 pm
” have a problem with people on cell phones in an art gallery”
LOL,better safe than sorry. Those people are using audio tour equipment at the museum.
By Nick on 01.10.08 5:26 pm
About 3 years ago I started insisting on getting the audio tour tapes at museums. It was the best thing I have done. Not only to I learn so much more than what is written on the short notes next to the art but I tend to stroll even longer and get my $$ worth for a day at the musuem.
I liked this post – it was a poem with pictures.
By Jody on 01.10.08 5:44 pm
A bit too much Twitter in your life?
By Karl on 01.10.08 6:23 pm
I haven’t been to a museum in so long. This reminded me that I need to go- soon.
By Whit on 01.10.08 8:30 pm
brilliant.
By kristen on 01.11.08 6:35 am
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