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By: Citizen of the Month » “Last” - The Conclusion

Citizen of the Month » “Last” - The Conclusion — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 15:59:21 +0000

[...] “Last” – Part One [...]

By: mommyknows

mommyknows — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 04:35:59 +0000

Waiting impatiently for the next installment. Really hoping I’m not the LAST commenter.

Happy New Year Neil.

By: vodkamom

vodkamom — Sun, 04 Jan 2009 13:06:47 +0000

That was brilliant. I was hypnotized throughout the whole piece!! (and with my add that says a lot.)

You’re damn good, neil!

By: patois

patois — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 20:00:35 +0000

Definitely needs to start running. And, you, start posting the next installment.

By: Charmaine Lake

Charmaine Lake — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 03:57:57 +0000

Heh. Excellent story. I can’t wait to hear the rest! That goodness my last name is near the beginning of the alphabet

By: floating princess

floating princess — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 03:24:53 +0000

…and he was the last in line at the fruit stand again, but he didn’t know that this time the fruit was poisonous and suddenly being last wasn’t so bad after all!

By: threeboys1mommy

threeboys1mommy — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 01:47:58 +0000

This is exactly why I didn’t marry Xavier Zamudio.

(to be continued)

By: Stacey

Stacey — Fri, 02 Jan 2009 23:34:56 +0000

But if the Apocalypse comes on New Year’s Eve, William has the best chance of survival. Surely that counts for something.

By: Momo Fali

Momo Fali — Fri, 02 Jan 2009 20:31:15 +0000

NO! Not a cliffhanger! I curse you, Neil.

By: brettdl

brettdl — Fri, 02 Jan 2009 20:19:38 +0000

Loser? Loser? This guy lives on beachfront property in a tropical paradise away from the rat race we call America? And his property has probably octupled in value over all those years?

Heck, he’s a winner and just hasn’t figured it out yet!